So my Literacy Narrative is on My Dyslexia, and how that shaped me as a reader and writer. The main thing that I am having rough time with is giving vivid details. i am more like a strait up give it to you blunt kinda writer i don't really like putting all of the fru-fru on the writing. I don't like all of the unnecessary details that unusually happen when I try to put vividness in it. That has hurt my grade int he past so I put what the reader needs to know and thats it.
I know that makes for a boring story but I got the information out to the reader and that is what is important. It is like closes as a consumer I don't need $500 pair of jean or a $100 Pair of sunglasses. All I need are a pair of shorts and $3 sunglasses, I'm am not saying those things aren't nice, but it is unnecessary.
Interesting analogy, Dell. Remember vivid doesn't need to mean frou-frou - these are the concrete sensory details, not the figurative language like metaphors and similes.
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