Sunday, September 29, 2013

Short story plot

My story is about a rookie Formula-1racer. The beginning of the story is about he starts racing as a child and how he as raw talent but no self-disipline. He meets a racing legend how wants to help him but the racer is reluctant. The legend is like Micky in the movie Rocky. He is someone with a lot of experience, And he wants to pass it on.

Then he works his way to the pros with the crew chief, he doesn't have the success he always had so he blames the crew chief. The racer after he fires his crew chief he gets in a accident in the race he has broken bones and third degree burns and is bed redden for a month. he comes back with his crew chief and he wins the championship against his rivals how caused the accident.

2 comments:

  1. Dear Dell,

    Your story sounds really cool. What is the crew chief? I like how you added a lot of detail to you story and told what was going to happen. It was very good.

    Happy Blogging,

    Annie Kramer

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  2. Dear Dell,
    Im very excited for your story. I like cars a lot so i think it will be pretty aweomse.
    Peace out holmes
    Nathan

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